Is my song completely horrible?

I have to tell you, you're pretty brave for doing this. I wouldn't post any of my stuff for the world to see in a million years. You'll have to be prepared for idiots trying to put you down. People find sick pleasure in doing so (and usually it isn't grammatically correct, either). I think it's decent, but then again, I'm not really one for love songs. (Pessimists of the world, unite!) Any ideas on the tune? If not, try looking at songs by Vienna Teng, Hem, or Priscilla Ahn for reference, unless, of course, you're looking for a more... "pop-ish" sound.